Which Will DO?!

Video #1: Folding Clothes



I like my attention getter very much, however, I think my zinger did not quite connected to my attention getter, so the conclusion needed more improvement. I like how I did not stop talking throughout the speech even when I am doing the demo with my hands, which is probably the most important goal of demonstration speeches. I like my projection of my voice during the speech, especially different that I had to apply different tone for my attention getter. However, I do not like that I was distracted by my audience during the speech, so I was a little blank out in my mind during the speech. Also, I do not like that I lay on the table to much, and was kind of shaking around during the speech, because it showed how nervous I was during the speech. 

Video #2: Pizza Toast



I do not like my attention getter, because it was not so effective, and I think it did not quite get the attention of my audience. However, I do like when I just spontaneously pull out my half-finished pizza toast, and throw them into the oven. It was quite fun doing so, because while I am doing my speech, my audience can be attracted by the smell, and wanted to listen to my speech. I guess it was a plus to my attention getter by throw the pizza toast into the oven. I like how I organized my speech in an order that seems logically, and the same order as when will the audience see the certain ingredient during the process of making pizza toast. However, I sometimes forgot what to say, but suddenly realized. I like how I add the details back into my speech, however, it kind of let the audience missed out what was in the progress.